Friday, January 27, 2012

Fiction: Barely There - Chapter 4

Note:  My god, has it really been a year since I started this?!?  Well, the good news is that I've outlined the rest of the "story".  Ok, "book" might be a better word. Jeez.  Hopefully it won't be a year in coming to finish this thing!  As often happens, a little concept in my head turned into its own little universe.   - Enjoy.  mikecb

Chapter 4

Jeff stood in his bathroom, somewhat in shock. Four hours ago, he had no girlfriend and no prospects. That had changed in a way he could never have expected!

Kelly was beaming a smile, as she turned and stepped out of the bathroom carrying the key to his chastity tube. Her blouse was still unbuttoned, barely covering her bra and panties. Jeff was puzzled, as he saw the back of her panties. She was a race fan, and discovered she was wearing Nascar socks, as they disrobed, so eagerly an hour ago, for their lunch hour tryst. Now, the back of her panties had him curious.
“Why do you have tire tracks on your ass?” he asked, with a grin.
Kelly turned and grinned. “What, you don’t like my skid marks?”
Jeff stared blankly, obviously not getting the joke. Kelly sighed, and continued to get dressed. “You’ve got a lot to learn, if you’re going to date a redneck!”
“Apparently!” he said, still befuddled.
They dressed quickly, as their quick lunch had turned into an unexpected romp in the sack, and Kelly was late getting back to her shop. They chatted amicably as he drove her back to work. It was nearly 2:00 PM when they arrived. Fortunately her next appointment was at 3:00, so she probably didn’t miss any business. Still, she didn’t like to miss walk-in opportunities.
As he pulled t in front of the store, they had an awkward pause. They were suddenly “a couple”, it seemed. They were both a little shell shocked. Jeff went around to the passenger side to help Kelly down from the truck. As she turned to get down, he stopped her with his hand on her thigh.
“Oh, I should get your number. I mean… all I have is the shop.”
“Oh, Jeez. Ya!”
Kelly gave her Cell number, as Jeff keyed it directly into his own. Kelly had his number in her appointment book, but she pulled out her phone, and entered his there as well. That done, Jeff eased her down from the passenger seat. They paused, awkwardly, again. Kelly was standing beside the truck, her tiny frame dwarfed by its enormous size. Her shoulders were at the seat level.
Kelly began. “Jeff, I’m…. I’ve never done anything like this. I mean, it was great and all, but…”
“Trust me, I haven’t either. It’s all kind of… sudden, huh?”
“Yea,” Kelly said, reaching into her pocket. She held the key to his chastity tube in her palm. “I don’t think I should be taking this. I mean, what if this just… if we don’t..”
Jeff smiled, gently, and took her hand in his. He closed her hand around the key. “I don’t know.” he said, “Maybe this was just a nooner, and we’ll both come to our senses… but… I kind of hope not.”
Kelly smiled, nervously.
“Look. Just hold onto it. No biggie. If our feelings change, you can always get it back to me. No harm, no foul. It’s just… I want you to know that I’m really serious. I… I really like you, Kelly. This wasn’t just a fling for me.”
Kelly’s smile brightened. “It wasn’t for me, either Jeff. I like you too. It’s just never happened to me this way before.”
Jeff smiled, knowing exactly how she felt.
Just then, another car pulled into the parking lot, in front of Barely There. Kelly looked over, anxiously.
“Look, you get back to work. I’ve got some things I’ve got to do this afternoon, too. I’ll call you, OK?”
“Deal!” she said with a smile, and went up on tip-toes to kiss him on the cheek.
Before Jeff could even respond, she was running over toward the store. waving. “Hey Dawn, I’m here! Don’t go ‘way!” she shouted.
End Chapter 4


  1. Hi Mike,

    this "Barely There" story is just wonderful. It kept me daydreaming all along while reading it. i so much hope for this to happen to me sometime for real. But in the meantime, i just hope for the story not to end. It is such a source of inspiration for me, while being self-locked and being a single.

    Chaste regards,

    1. Thanks, Roland. There is MUCH to go with the story. Perhaps another chapter tomorrow. I've been under the weather today, or I would have had another out by now. :-)

  2. This is a most delightful story! I am looking forward to the next chapter.

  3. I agree! Can't wait to read where their relationship goes. When's the next chapeter coming?

  4. Sorry it's taking so long. I have most of the next 4 chapters written, but honestly, they're not very steamy. I'm hoping to remedy that before I let 'em out in the wild. :-)

    In the mean time, I wrote another vignette. I'll publish it today.


  5. Great job! Would you be interested in being included in my "F(r)iction Friday" series and possibly the forthcoming book?

  6. F(r)iction Friday

    (Seeing if the link will work this time. Feel free to delete if it doesn't.)